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DBZGamingAddict

aka Kratos, The God of War

  • I live in Earth Realm, The U.S. of A.
  • My occupation is Playing God of War, Assassin's Creed, COD, drawing my comic book, and quoting characters from famous games/ movies.
  • I am Male Species
  • DBZGamingAddict

    Hello fellow earthlings. Now that we have over 45 articles I started mah own reviews. Only doing what you said ESSJ4. These reviews are only my opinion. If you get a bad review I am not trying to be mean. That only means that you have to get better. LEAVE COMMENTS BELOW FOR REQUESTS.

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    Life Of A Son Pros-

    • It is about Broly and Paragus after Planet Vegeta
    • Good grammar and spelling
    • I like the beginning telling about Broly's immense power

    Cons-

    • Its kinda weird to keep calling your king King Vegeta. For example, instead of saying 'King Vegeta' over and over again you could say 'My king' or 'Sire'.
    • The short story overview pretty gave the plot away.
    • Start new paragraphs when a person is gonna say something.

    Final Comments- Good story with some flaws.…


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  • DBZGamingAddict

    [Hi guys! This blog is for suggestions for my fan-fic Dora's Revenge. I was wondering if anybody wanted to work on this story with me, you can work on chapters, sagas, character pages, anything like that. Also, post your thoughts and suggestions about this fan-fic below. If you want to work on Dora's Revenge with me, just say so in a comment below.][link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[ [ [ [link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link title[link …

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